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Guest post: writing a killer fight scene

Writing a crisp, adrenaline-pumping fight scene can be a challenge. Today we have a guest post from Kelsey Rae Barthel to examine how she approaches hers. Here’s Kelsey…

One of the most frequent compliments I have received about my first published book, Beyond the Code, is that readers love my fight scenes. My process for constructing these scenes is truly a love-hate relationship for me but I can’t argue with the results.

Writing the fight scene

Here are some tips on how you can make your own exciting and interesting action scenes:

  • Plan every step: The keystone to a good action sequence in writing, as well as film, is careful choreography. It is imperative when writing a stimulating fight scene that you plan out literally every step, every move, and every attack. It all needs to be plotted out ahead of time before you write a word. This method will insure that you don’t lose your audience in a confusing mess of movements that don’t mesh. Like a puzzle, it all has to fit together flawlessly to make the big picture.
  • Make it interesting: Another big part of weaving a pumping fight scene that will leap out at your readings is to constantly change up the moves. You can’t be satisfied with simple tit for tat throw down. You have to concentrate on making every attack inventive and new. Every battle is different and your warriors have to react and adapt to the changes. Keep it dynamite and always remember that there is always more than one way to accomplish your goal.
  • But also, keep it grounded: Despite my previous talking point about keeping things interesting, it’s equally as important to keep your action grounded in reality to an extent. Now, keep in mind, I don’t mean you have to only write action that would happen in real life. Fantastic powers are a norm in genres like fantasy or science fiction. What I’m talking about is keeping the action grounded in what could happen in your world. If you go too far out of the realm of possibility, you may be breaking your readers’ suspension of disbelief. You always want your readers to believe that what’s happening is possible in the context of your story.
  • Last but not least, don’t lose track of your characters: Above all else, remember your characters and what they can do. If one character that is involved in the fight has an ability to end it easily, you can’t conveniently forget about it in favour of a more drawn out brawl. Your readers won’t forget those details and will not hesitate to ask why you didn’t remember. You can either place a piece of dialog explaining why the character couldn’t end things easily or take them out altogether. Also, don’t lose track of the other characters in the scene. Realistically, if two people are fighting, their friends or comrades won’t just stand by while it happens. You can’t trap your side characters in a realm of inaction.

I hope you were able to draw some wisdom from my experience and I hope other writers out there decide to join me in writing action packed throw downs.


Kelsey Rae Barthel

Photo of Kelsey Rae BarthelToday’s guest post has been submitted by Kelsey Rae Barthel, author of Beyond the Code. Kelsey Rae Barthel grew up in the quiet town of Hay Lakes in Alberta, a sleepy place of only 500 people. Living in such a calm setting gave her a lot of spare time to imagine grand adventures of magic and danger, inspired by the comic books and anime she enjoyed. Upon graduating high school, Kelsey moved to Edmonton and eventually began working in the business of airline cargo, but she never stopped imagining those adventures. Beyond the Code is her first novel.



Beyond the Code

Check out Kelsey’s novel Beyond the Code.

Cover for Beyond the CodeTo the common world, Aurora Falon is merely the pampered daughter of a rich and influential family. But to the secret world of The Order, she is Luna, the powerful and formidable warrior knight, under the rule of her master, Cole Iver. Together, they strive to bring down Damon Lexus, a wicked master who uses her knights in cowardly and dishonourable ways for her own selfish desires. But when they obtain evidence that may bring Damon Lexus under the judgement of The Order’s ruling power, The Hand Council, Damon makes a rash decision and orders the assassination of Cole Iver.

By pure coincidence, Luna catches Damon’s knight in the act but is too late to save her master and kills the assassin in a moment of grief stricken rage. Luna knows the one with her master’s blood on her hands is not the one she killed, she seeks the assassin’s master. But after a failed attempt at revenge, Luna is pulled from the depths of her dark anger and put on a better path by the Hunter who was ordered to kill her. Together, they will work to break away from being mere tools for the powerful and become heroes.

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By Robert Batten

Robert is the author of Blood Capital, a dystopian sci-fi novel of espionage and rebellion set in the ruins of Sydney. It is due for release by Inkshares in January 2019 after winning two major prizes in the 2016 Launch Pad competition: the Inkshares Publishing Prize and Ridley Scott / Scott Free Guaranteed Option Prize.

Ever since acquiring his latest glasses, people have been telling Robert he looks like Clark Kent. He’s since sworn to never buy another pair of glasses again. When not imagining himself as the man of steel, Robert reads and writes science-fiction and fantasy novels. He loves reading David Eddings, Jim Butcher, Ilona Andrews, Sarah J. Maas, V.E. Schwab, Laini Taylor, Garth Nix, among many others.

Until he achieves the success of his literary role models, Robert earns a living as an IT consultant.